Betrayal-Competition- by VincentSnowcrow, literature
Literature
Betrayal-Competition-
So you take the dagger
and thrust it straight,unfaltering,
buried to the hilt in my heart.
can you hear it?
the sick thud, the trickle of my blood?
can you feel it?
the warm wet feeling over your hand, in your eyes?
look up
deep in my eyes.
can you see?
watch as my life, my love, my hate, my very soul
drain into my heart
and over your hand
where it finally falls to the dirt
where it belongs...
No!
I won't let you kill me!
I won't give tyou the satisfaction of watching my soul drain away!
Kneeling before you I gather together the shattered fragments of my soul,
and force them back into the black abyssal hole you've opened in
So you take the dager
and thrust it straight,unfaltering,
buried to the hilt in my heart.
can you hear it?
the sik thud, the trickle of my blood?
can you feel it?
the warm wet feeling over your hand, in your eyes?
look up
deep in my eyes.
can you see?
whatch as my life, my love, my hate, my very soul
drain into my heart
and over your hand
where it finally falls to the dirt
where it belongs.
I lay you down to sleep.
I can see your fear
your shivers your sweat
so cold so restless.
you are trapped in a tower of nightnares
gaurded by a dragon of fear.
Ive come to save you and destroy the dragon.
not with a noble stead
or powerful sword.
but with a simple act of compassion
a kiss
soft
on the cheek.
the dragon is destroyed
and you are set free
to dream
of warmth
of compassion
and of love.
the way it should be.
Shy Love
Why do you chase after me
When I run away?
Why do you give me hint after hint?
Why do you give me countless openings
To ask you if you love me?
Why do you fallow me day after day
When being around me gives you pain and sadness?
Why do you prolong your pain
When you could just ask me
If I say yes
Then your happiness will over flow.
If I say no
Then the pain will break your heart
But it will pass.
Why do you prolong your pain?
I never thought anyone could love
With true passion.
I never knew anyone could like another
Enough to truly love.
I never understood love.
Until I met you
Now I understand love.
I know what love is.
A feeling
A knowledge
A truth
So profound it can not be explained
Only felt
Experienced
Believed.
Never leave me.
I beg on my knees
For to know love and the feeling
And be without it
Is a fate
Worse than death.
Please I beg you
Never
Go
A window into the soul.
A key to your feeings.
A promise of a slow death.
The invitation to love.
The fire of adventure.
The reflection of a black sky with bright clouds.
The shine of a precious stone.
The ripples of a deep sea frozen in time.
A weakness.
A strength.
The only way to disover
the pride of a good father
the all of a brides gfeelings
reavealed behind her pure white veile.
the refletion of..
the fires of hell...
the golden gates of Heaven
the image of mine in yours
Deviant Art:Poet Comunity by VincentSnowcrow, literature
Literature
Deviant Art:Poet Comunity
I dont understnd how a person,
not an artist or phsycho but a siple person
could so perfectly describe a feeling such as love or hate
or those that leed one to suicide.
yet here we are
in a veritable potluk of thees descriptions we so properly call poems.
writen by any
normal
simple
every-day person.
it nearly leaves me thinking
that you may all have bleeding hearts.
just like mine.
I wonder what it would be like to never have a heart?
sometimes I wish I didn't have one.
Then I whold never mss it.
It wold never be broken or hurt.
I would never feel sorrow or pain
no anger or confusion.
Maybe when the time comes,
Ill shoot out my heart
quick and fast
so I wont feel
the anger and confusion
turn to painful regret
just emptyness...
The Feeling of Love by VincentSnowcrow, literature
Literature
The Feeling of Love
When you love it is a wonderful feeling.
It spreads
To your heart
Your soul
Your very happiness
But when he or she of whom you love says
They don't love you
The feeling of warmth turns to ice
Enclosing
Your heart your soul
Your very happiness
Then they who you love grab hold of the ice
And rip it away
Taking with it
Your heart
Your soul
Your very happiness
Leaving an open hole
So all can see you are heartless
Soulless
And sad.
A great monster of nature
Size reduced to a fraction of its former glory
Who's insides have bean replaced by the product of industry
Skin replicated so as to put it to shame
Paws bereft of claws that should be
Throat removed
Mouth sown shut.
Never to taste blood, meat, water.
Eyes of crystal clear glass
Darker than the blackest night.
Ever open
Staring into your soul.
Soaking up all that you are, all that you have bean.
And there's nothing you can do about it.
Because you are
A fuzzy wuzzy
Teddy bear.
Betrayal-Competition- by VincentSnowcrow, literature
Literature
Betrayal-Competition-
So you take the dagger
and thrust it straight,unfaltering,
buried to the hilt in my heart.
can you hear it?
the sick thud, the trickle of my blood?
can you feel it?
the warm wet feeling over your hand, in your eyes?
look up
deep in my eyes.
can you see?
watch as my life, my love, my hate, my very soul
drain into my heart
and over your hand
where it finally falls to the dirt
where it belongs...
No!
I won't let you kill me!
I won't give tyou the satisfaction of watching my soul drain away!
Kneeling before you I gather together the shattered fragments of my soul,
and force them back into the black abyssal hole you've opened in
So you take the dager
and thrust it straight,unfaltering,
buried to the hilt in my heart.
can you hear it?
the sik thud, the trickle of my blood?
can you feel it?
the warm wet feeling over your hand, in your eyes?
look up
deep in my eyes.
can you see?
whatch as my life, my love, my hate, my very soul
drain into my heart
and over your hand
where it finally falls to the dirt
where it belongs.
I lay you down to sleep.
I can see your fear
your shivers your sweat
so cold so restless.
you are trapped in a tower of nightnares
gaurded by a dragon of fear.
Ive come to save you and destroy the dragon.
not with a noble stead
or powerful sword.
but with a simple act of compassion
a kiss
soft
on the cheek.
the dragon is destroyed
and you are set free
to dream
of warmth
of compassion
and of love.
the way it should be.
Shy Love
Why do you chase after me
When I run away?
Why do you give me hint after hint?
Why do you give me countless openings
To ask you if you love me?
Why do you fallow me day after day
When being around me gives you pain and sadness?
Why do you prolong your pain
When you could just ask me
If I say yes
Then your happiness will over flow.
If I say no
Then the pain will break your heart
But it will pass.
Why do you prolong your pain?
I never thought anyone could love
With true passion.
I never knew anyone could like another
Enough to truly love.
I never understood love.
Until I met you
Now I understand love.
I know what love is.
A feeling
A knowledge
A truth
So profound it can not be explained
Only felt
Experienced
Believed.
Never leave me.
I beg on my knees
For to know love and the feeling
And be without it
Is a fate
Worse than death.
Please I beg you
Never
Go
A window into the soul.
A key to your feeings.
A promise of a slow death.
The invitation to love.
The fire of adventure.
The reflection of a black sky with bright clouds.
The shine of a precious stone.
The ripples of a deep sea frozen in time.
A weakness.
A strength.
The only way to disover
the pride of a good father
the all of a brides gfeelings
reavealed behind her pure white veile.
the refletion of..
the fires of hell...
the golden gates of Heaven
the image of mine in yours
Deviant Art:Poet Comunity by VincentSnowcrow, literature
Literature
Deviant Art:Poet Comunity
I dont understnd how a person,
not an artist or phsycho but a siple person
could so perfectly describe a feeling such as love or hate
or those that leed one to suicide.
yet here we are
in a veritable potluk of thees descriptions we so properly call poems.
writen by any
normal
simple
every-day person.
it nearly leaves me thinking
that you may all have bleeding hearts.
just like mine.
I wonder what it would be like to never have a heart?
sometimes I wish I didn't have one.
Then I whold never mss it.
It wold never be broken or hurt.
I would never feel sorrow or pain
no anger or confusion.
Maybe when the time comes,
Ill shoot out my heart
quick and fast
so I wont feel
the anger and confusion
turn to painful regret
just emptyness...
The Feeling of Love by VincentSnowcrow, literature
Literature
The Feeling of Love
When you love it is a wonderful feeling.
It spreads
To your heart
Your soul
Your very happiness
But when he or she of whom you love says
They don't love you
The feeling of warmth turns to ice
Enclosing
Your heart your soul
Your very happiness
Then they who you love grab hold of the ice
And rip it away
Taking with it
Your heart
Your soul
Your very happiness
Leaving an open hole
So all can see you are heartless
Soulless
And sad.
A great monster of nature
Size reduced to a fraction of its former glory
Who's insides have bean replaced by the product of industry
Skin replicated so as to put it to shame
Paws bereft of claws that should be
Throat removed
Mouth sown shut.
Never to taste blood, meat, water.
Eyes of crystal clear glass
Darker than the blackest night.
Ever open
Staring into your soul.
Soaking up all that you are, all that you have bean.
And there's nothing you can do about it.
Because you are
A fuzzy wuzzy
Teddy bear.
I started writing when I was in high school and received hours of mentoring from a teacher I met there who is a big deal poet in Seattle WA who goes by the name of Roma Ray.